September 29th 2011
Rich’s left foot made it onto the moon
In 2011 Rich put his first foot on the moon. He was the first ever kid to put his left foot on the moon. Rich thought it was pretty amazing! His mum became famous. Does that mean she had cameras around her?... Well yes!. When she was walking on the path one of the photographic walked into a pole. Luckily they had a wonderful hero beside her. It was rich the first one to get on the moon. Sure he was so famous, he had one of the newest phones. The moon has a bunch of boulders. Rich jumped into one. The moon had dust on it. It looked like a big apple. But of course it was not... red, the dust had a lot of crashed tires from the space mobile.
#the missionary that helped the humans on the moon were cold moon buggy and space mova. Seven years later I am what I am now. A adult I have a lot of friends, named Alize and Thom. We are learning different languages.
Wow what a fantastic title! Your ideas in the story made me laugh, especially when the photographer walked in to a pole! haha!
ReplyDeleteI am wondering why he had one of the most amazing phones? Did he buy it with his riches for being famous? Did he have it before he went to the moon?
Rich sounds like a pretty awesome guy! It would be cool to know how he got to the moon? Maybe you could add that to improve your story?