Welcome to my story it is about a fox and a spy. It was at a party everyone was invited. Some one walked away to find their friend. He cald not find him. Then the party turned into a search party. There was a lot of different cars. The spy saw a flying car and he really wanted it. So he sent a big bomb, then he aimed it at the fox, and fired it, and shot. It missed...the fox sore a big bomb fly past him stopped the race luckily the rider survived. and got on another horse and kept riding. The other hours that was wining fall back into second place. The horse that was coming last came first. and it landed right in the middle of the search party.
One of the events that happened during this time was a hose event it cilde the horse that was winning. So the horse that was losing came first.
You did a really awesome job on your sequel I liked how you had lots of writing but there was still a lot of detail like how it was a party then it turned into a search party. Next time try to add where his friend was going and how he got lost.Was it hard thinking of all that writing?
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